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Organizing Thesis Statments (OTS’s): Help from Cat
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Intro TS (OTS):
My cat is like me; my cat is sleek, unsociable and huffy; she likes to curl up on a warm bed on a rainy day; we both love food!
Body Paragraph Topic Sentence 1: (thesis + support point 1)
My cat and I are very alike, for instance, this morning we both slept in because it was raining gently, still dark and our bed so warm.
BPTS2:
I sometimes think of my cat as my twin, we both like the same foods. For breakfast we shared sardines and broad beans in chili tomatoes salsa on toast.
BPTS3:
I was so like my cat this afternoon when I strode past the young many that recently stood me up. He appeared surprised as I, in a stunning figure hugging swimsuit, hair sleeked back and swinging arms “huffed “through my nose a hello in his direction, and kept on going.
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Conclusion TS: restate key word from thesis and add support points in the order given in the OTS.
Evidently, my cat and I are kindred souls in three main ways; our attitudes when annoyed and our tastes in leisure and cuisine.
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